Lest anyone interpret silence as agreement, I'm OK (not enthusiastic,
but OK) with most of the added text in this revision, but I have a
problem with the last two paragraphs.

> This does not state what the implicit value of "i=" is, relative to    
> "d=". In this context, that fact is irrelevant.

I'm not sure what point is being made, but RFC 4871 does explicitly
define the default value of "i=" (an empty Local-part followed by an "@"
followed by the domain from the "d=" tag).  It isn't clear what "this"
context is, and the paragraph is likely to introduce confusion as to
whether the default value in RFC 4871 no longer exists.

> Another example is the difference between the socket interface to TCP    
> versus the TCP protocol itself. There is the activity within the    
> protocol stack, and then there is the activity within in the software    
> libraries that are actually used.

This analogy isn't clearly stated, and in any case is discussion that is
irrelevant in the context of a protocol specification.

Both of these paragraphs should be removed.

-Jim

Dave CROCKER wrote:
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871-errata-07.txt
> Date: Fri, 26 Jun 2009 19:30:01 -0700 (PDT)
> From: [email protected]
> To: [email protected], 
> [email protected], 
>        [email protected]
>
> New version (-07) has been submitted for 
> draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871-errata-07.txt.
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871-errata-07.txt
>
>
> Diff from previous version:
> http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871-errata-07
>
> IETF Secretariat.
>
>
>   
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