Section 3

"The IAOC is accountable for the structure of the IASA and thus decides
which functions are to be outsourced. All outsourcing must be via
well-defined contracts or equivalent instruments. If any functions are
performed in-house, they must be clearly specified and documented with
well-defined deliverables, service level agreements, and transparent
accounting for the cost of such functions."

Wouldn't the requirements for functions to be "clearly specified and
documented with well-defined deliverables, service level agreements and
transparent accounting for the cost of such functions" apply to outsourced
activities as well?

Suggest this be rewritten to:

"The IAOC is accountable for the structure of the IASA and thus decides
which functions are to be outsourced. All outsourcing must be via
well-defined contracts or equivalent instruments.  Both outsourced and
in-house functions must be clearly specified and documented with
well-defined deliverables, service level agreements, and transparent
accounting for the cost of such functions."


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