W.r.t. these comments from Lynn:
>
.. snip ..
> -- In 2.1
>
> > IAOC: Internet Administrative Oversight Committee, defined
> > by this document.
>
> Should be IETF rather than Internet (especially with the current
> governance discussion underway unless we really want to liven that
> discussion up :-). I think the references in the document itself are
> OK but I did not do a thorough check.
>
Yes. Changed in my edit buffer.
OLD:
<t hangText="IAOC:">
Internet Administrative Oversight Committee,
defined by this document.
</t>
NEW:
<t hangText="IAOC:">
IETF Administrative Oversight Committee,
defined by this document.
</t>
>
... snip ..
> Minor editorial comments:
>
> - In 3.1 6th para - delete redundant "should"
>
> - In 3.2 1st para - delete redundant "be"
>
> - In 4 4th para - delete redundant "as"
>
All fixed in my edit buffer.
Thanks for catching
Bert
_______________________________________________
Ietf mailing list
[email protected]
https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
