I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-4-18 IESG Telechat date: 2010-4-22 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I have some nits Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 7 what you are registering is a media subtype and not a media type. The media type is application. So "defines a new media type" should be "defines a new media subtype" and "Registration of media type" should be "Registration of media subtype". 2. The document defines new object identifiers like id-ct-KP-aKeyPackage and AsymmetricKeyPackageModuleV1. Where is the list of these identifiers kept and how do you update this list in order to guarantee the uniqueness of these identifiers.
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