Thanks. I picked these up in -09, so that there is no issue. On Mar 1, 2011, at 3:32 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-mrw-nat66-08 > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > Review Date: 2011-03-01 > IETF LC End Date: 2011-03-02 > IESG Telechat date: 2011-03-03 > > (Note: The Last Call deadline and the Telechat are only a day apart, so this > review serves both purpose) > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an experimental RFC. I have a > few nit comments that could probably be dealt with in Auth48 or by the RFC > editori > > Major issues: > > None > > Minor issues: > > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -- 1.1, 4 paragraphs from end: > > Please expand RIR on first mention. > > -- 1.2, 2nd paragraph: "... and the defined address mapping mechanism is > checksum-neutral." > > Redundant with previous paragraph. > > -- 5, third bullet: "An application instance wishing to establish > communication with a peer which is "behind" an NPTv6 Translator ..." > > s / which / that > > _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
