On Mar 4, 2011, at 6:01 AM, Roni Even wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04 > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date:2011–3–4 > IETF LC End Date: 2011–3–18 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. > > Major issues: > > > Minor issues: > > In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end > connection is TCP while in other places like section 3, 4th paragraph you > mention that UDP is used to tunnel packet end to end. So what are the TCP > connections used for?
section 3 talks about the use of UDP encapsulation for end host's data packets. section 5 and section 6.1 refer to TCP connections used by user applications running on end hosts. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Ietf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
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