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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-11 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 8.5 and 8.6 the draft says that "If no more password pre-processing techniques are supported the exchange MUST be terminated." Reading section 6, I thought that NONE MUST be supported for interoperability purpose. 2. In section 8.1 and in figure 1 and figure 2 is there a maximum value for "counter"? Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 1 just before 1.1 you have "suceed" instead of "succeed" 2. In section 4 third bullet "an" instead of "and" 3. In section 4.2 "Two elementx" instead of "Two elements" 4. In section 5 second row "authenticaiton" should be "authentication" 5. In section 6 fourth row "identitcal" instead of "identical"
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