Thanks for the response! Comments below, eliding the bits I think need no 
further comment.

On Jun 8, 2011, at 12:11 PM, Scott Rose wrote:

> Perhaps the document should only update RFC 2672 instead of obsoleting it?  

That would resolve my concern, if it fits with the intent of the work group.


> 
> As for the nits:
> 
> 
> On Tue, Jun 7, 2011 at 6:35 PM, Ben Campbell <[email protected]> wrote:  
> 

[...]

> Yes, will correct.
>  
> -- ..., 7th paragraph: "...replaced with the word "DELETED"."
> 
> Won't that just leave the word "deleted" hanging on page without explanation? 
> Wouldn't it be better to just simply delete it?
> 
> 
> Maybe, but I think the logic was that if there is some text there (just 
> something), it can be cleanly referenced (i.e. "DELETED [RFCXXXX]")if someone 
> is making a revised version of the RFC for some purpose.  Purely deleting it 
> accomplishes the task, but this provides a good "hook" for a paper trail.
> 

Okay. On reflection, it's not like we really render the updates the old RFC 
documents.


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