2011/12/13 SM <s...@resistor.net>: > At 11:07 13-12-2011, Mykyta Yevstifeyev wrote: >> >> This may be read as if RFC 5988 is to determine all the rel types that >> were used at the time of its writing, but I don't think the paragraph >> directly implies this. I mean that it hasn't been registered either >> centralized (in RFC 5988) or separately here. > > > In the Introduction Section, the following sentence could be dropped: > > "However, 'disclosure' relation type has not been mentioned in RFC 5988 > when creating the registry for relation types; nor was it registered > separately." > > The last paragraph of that section explains what the document is about.
I've already done this, per Julian's comments. > > I suggest an editorial change in Section 2: > > "Whenever the 'disclosure' relation is defined, the target IRI > [RFC5998] MUST either" Added. > > Quoting the example in Section 3: > > "The following are the patent disclosures known at present made > with respect to this specification: > <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov/8546987";> > U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul> > <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su/pat/98745-6";> > U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul> > <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="ftp://ftp.legal.va/a/patent3.pdf";> > Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul>" > > If the IETF takes the security of the Vatican City seriously (there's a typo > in the example), I suggest adding a ".example" at the end of the domain > names. I'm fine with this. So I've changed this to: The following are the patent disclosures known at present made with respect to this specification: <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov.example/8546987";> U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul> <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su.example/pat/98745-6";> U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul> <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://pat.va.example/a/patent3.pdf";> Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul> Mykyta Yevstifeyev > > Regards, > -sm > _______________________________________________ > Ietf mailing list > Ietf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
