On Nov 29, 2012, at 6:09 PM, Peter Yee <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a > new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: Nov-29-2012 > IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012 > IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012 > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that > should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] > > All other corrections from the -13 review were accepted and the other > changes in the current version appear reasonable. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Section 4.2.1.8, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: bracket "Section 2.8.1" in > "(see" and ")" for readability. > [This is my same suggestion from the previous review. I won't mention it > again, I promise. :-) ]
Sorry we missed this before. I'll work with Martin to see that this is addressed. -- Chuck Lever chuck[dot]lever[at]oracle[dot]com
