Hi Dave, Sorry for a late reply addressing your comments. Please, see inline.
Thanks, Nabil From: "Black, David" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Monday, August 20, 2012 8:57 PM To: "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "Bitar, Nabil N" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Sagessi <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Cc: "Black, David" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: August 20, 2012 IETF LC End Date: August 20, 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. <NB> Thanks. This draft covers defect behavior for Ethernet pseudowires, including defect state mapping and PE defect reporting behavior. The draft is generally in good shape. I found a few minor nits. 1) The draft uses a lot of acronyms - while each acronym appears to be expanded on first use, an additional section near the start of the draft listing all of them would be helpful. <NB> Done. 2) There's a typo in the first paragraph of section 2: covers the following Ethernet OAM (Opertaions, Administration and Opertaions -> Operations. <NB> Thanks. Done. 3) The following normative reference is incomplete - please add additional information that will enable a reader to locate the referenced document: [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", MEF16, January 2006. [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", Metro Ethernet Forum Technical Specification MEF16, January 2006. <NB> changed it to : 4) idnits 2.12.13 did not like the pagination: == The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there was 22 longer pages, the longest (page 1) being 61 lines <NB> That will be fixed. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ----------------------------------------------------
