There should be a comma in the last sentence rather than a full stop (just before the word therefore). There should be a space between the world "oldest" and the first bracket. I personally think it would look better if you put ... "so the integrated graphics cards can reach their fullest potential". Sorry if I'm a bit picky, but it would be better if it sounds/looks as proffesional as it can be ;)
On May 7, 8:25 pm, Namige <[email protected]> wrote: > Ok so I start and you guys add to it and we'll compile it in the end > and then copy and paste - > > Hi, I'm from a google group called INTEL 9XX Gaming which specialises > in intel integrated graphics card driver modding etc.. we aim to > modify drivers made for the 965, mobile 4 series... and make it > suitable for other chipsets, ie 945gm. They work especially well, > giving a much needed performance boost for gaming which official > drivers just don't give. However, we would obviously want NEW drivers > from intel which fixes all the bugs and improve on their drivers so > the integrated graphics cards can be given their fullest potential. > Our drivers at the moment give much greater performance than stock > drivers, but are unstable, giving bsods sometimes. therefore we have > to use the oldest(stable drivers) in order to combat this. > > --ok guys please add to this or modify my message for greater > accuracy-- > > On May 7, 7:41 pm, KinGPin <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > so i say prepare a message, write it down here, and we will copy paste > > send it...- Hide quoted text - > > - Show quoted text - --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "INTEL 9XX Gaming" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/intel9x-gaming?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
