Revision: 6082
          http://ipcop.svn.sourceforge.net/ipcop/?rev=6082&view=rev
Author:   eoberlander
Date:     2011-11-14 17:30:37 +0000 (Mon, 14 Nov 2011)
Log Message:
-----------
Corrections to proxy server section. Prepare to move CRE section to later proxy 
chapter.

Modified Paths:
--------------
    IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/services.xml

Modified: IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/services.xml
===================================================================
--- IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/services.xml    2011-11-14 07:00:34 UTC (rev 
6081)
+++ IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/services.xml    2011-11-14 17:30:37 UTC (rev 
6082)
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
                 <para><link 
linkend="services-webproxy"><guimenuitem>Proxy</guimenuitem></link>
-                    (Web Proxy Server)
+                    (Web proxy server)
                 </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
@@ -100,12 +100,11 @@
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Enabled on...</guilabel></title>
                 <para>
-                    Tick the appropriate checkbox to enable the Proxy Server 
+                    Tick the appropriate checkbox to enable the proxy server 
                     to listen for requests on the selected interface 
                     (Green or Blue).
-                    If the proxy service is disabled, all client requests will
-                    be forwarded directly to the destination address bypassing
-                    the proxy service.
+                    If the proxy service is disabled, all client requests will 
+                    be forwarded directly to the destination address.
                 </para>
             </formalpara>
            <formalpara>
@@ -113,14 +112,14 @@
                 <para>
                     If <quote>transparent mode</quote> is enabled, 
                     all requests for the destination port 80 will be 
-                    forwarded to the Proxy server without the need to 
+                    forwarded to the proxy server without the need to 
                     specially configure your clients.
                 </para>
             </formalpara>
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Proxy Port</guilabel></title>
                 <para>
-                    This is the port on which the Proxy server will listen 
+                    This is the port on which the proxy server will listen 
                     for client requests. 
                     The default is 8080.
                     In transparent mode, all client requests for port 80 will 
@@ -130,7 +129,7 @@
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Visible hostname</guilabel> - optional</title>
                 <para>
-                    If you want to display a different hostname in Proxy 
server 
+                    If you want to display a different hostname in proxy 
server 
                     error messages to clients, or for upstream proxy servers, 
                     then specify it here.
                     If you leave it blank, your IPCop&apos;s real hostname 
@@ -140,7 +139,7 @@
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Cache administrator email</guilabel> - 
optional</title>
                 <para>
-                    You can specify an email address that appears in Proxy 
server 
+                    You can specify an email address that appears in proxy 
server 
                     error messages to clients.
                     If you leave it blank, <quote>webmaster</quote> 
                     will be used instead.
@@ -149,14 +148,14 @@
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Error messages language</guilabel></title>
                 <para>
-                    You can select the language in which any Proxy Server 
+                    You can select the language in which any proxy server 
                     error messages will be shown to clients.
                 </para>
             </formalpara>
             <formalpara>
                 <title><guilabel>Error messages design</guilabel></title>
                 <para>
-                    You can select the design style in which Proxy Server 
+                    You can select the design style in which proxy server 
                     error messages are shown to clients.
                     You can chose between 
                     <quote>IPCop</quote> and 
@@ -307,7 +306,9 @@
                 <para>
                     If you choose to enable the proxy, then you can also log 
                     web accesses by ticking the
-                    <guibutton>Log Enabled</guibutton> checkbox. 
+                    <guibutton>Log Enabled</guibutton> checkbox.
+                    This enables the proxy server system log as well, 
+                    which might be useful for troubleshooting.
                 </para>
             </formalpara>
             <para>
@@ -496,12 +497,19 @@
         <!-- Text copyright Marco Sondermann, sub-edited by Eric Oberlander -->
             <title>Classroom extensions</title>
             <para>
-                The ClassRoom Extensions (CRE) to the Proxy Server
+                The ClassRoom Extensions (CRE) to the proxy server
                 give you the ability to delegate administrative tasks to 
                 non-administrative users through a separate Web Access 
                 Management page.
             </para>
             <para>
+                See the
+<!--                <link linkend="proxy-cre">Classroom extensions</link>
+-->                Classroom extensions [<emphasis>link to 
follow...</emphasis>]
+                section for further information.
+            </para>
+<!-- section to be moved to proxy chapter
+            <para>
                 The CRE creates a new role, between that of Admin and Users: 
                 the Supervisor. 
             </para>
@@ -634,7 +642,8 @@
             <para>
                 Subnet (CIDR notation)
             </para>
-            <screen><computeroutput>192.168.1.32/28</computeroutput></screen>  
        
+            <screen><computeroutput>192.168.1.32/28</computeroutput></screen>
+            -->
         </sect3>
 
         <sect3 id="services-webproxy-time">
@@ -878,7 +887,7 @@
             <para>
                 With the <quote>Fake useragent</quote> option you have the 
ability to rewrite this
                 string for all your clients. For outgoing requests the 
useragent header field will
-                be changed by the Proxy Server and submitted to external sites 
instead of the
+                be changed by the proxy server and submitted to external sites 
instead of the
                 original useragent string. This can be useful to protect your 
privacy or to enforce
                 a desired level of compatibility.
             </para>

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