Hi,

A few comments on the address selection API draft.

non-editorial:
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6. Security Considerations

   This document conforms to the same security implications as specified
   in IPv6 Basic Socket API [2] document. It is also recommended that
   the applications set IPV6_V6ONLY IP level socket option to permit
   the nodes to not process IPv4 packets as IPv4 Mapped addresses.

==> even if I kinda agree with the last sentence, it seems to me to be a bit
farfetched to be mentioned in this spec?

   - Is there a need for "validation" functions to go with these
     preferences such as functions that check whether an address is
     a temporary address?

==> perhaps validation functions would be nice, but generally speaking, it
is not possible to, for certainty, to ensure what an address is or isn't?

==> Please clarify whether you meant a macro like "IN6_IS_ADDR_LOOPBACK" or
something "verify whether this address assigned on the node was of type 
X"?



mostly editorial:
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Expires: August, 2003                             Samita Chakrabarti 
                                                  Sun Microsystems, Inc.
                                                  Julien Laganier
                                                  Sun Microsystems, Inc.
                                                  LIP / ENS-Lyon

                                                  February, 2003
==> a typo with affilications I assume, extra Sun?

              IPv6 Socket API for source address selection
               draft-chakrabarti-ipv6-addrselect-api-00.txt 

==> uppercase words

INTERNET-DRAFT  IPv6 Socket API for source address selection  Feb., 2003

==> s/Feb., 2003/Feb 2003/ should be enough.

4.  Changes to the protocol-independent nodename translation

    Section 8 of Default Address Selction [1] document indicates about
==> s/Selc/Selec/

5. IPv4-Mapped IPv6 Addresses

   IPv4-Mapped IPv6 addresses are not supported for setting preference
   on home, care-of-address, CGA, non-CGA, public or privacy auto-
   configured addresses as source addresses. Because they are all pure
   IPv6 addresses. 

==> reword the last sentence to mix better with the rest.
==> isn't it "IPv4-mapped" with small m?

[2]    R.E. Gilligan, S. Thomson, J. Bound, J. McCann, W. R. Stevens,
           "Basic Socket Interface Extensions for IPv6", 
            draft-ietf-ipngwg-rfc2553bis-10.txt, December, 2002.

==> surnames first, initial next in the ref author lists

-- 
Pekka Savola                 "You each name yourselves king, yet the
Netcore Oy                    kingdom bleeds."
Systems. Networks. Security. -- George R.R. Martin: A Clash of Kings

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