Hi,

After a quick wdiff, two classes of comments:

 1) some comments never made it to the draft, were they missed or rejected 
for some purpose?  (Example: MLDv1 Source Address Selection document which 
has been approved by the IESG.)

 2) a few typos I came across:

   Router Advertisement optionss is dependent on supporting the

==> s/ss/s/

   If an application is going join any-source multicast, it SHOULD

==> s/going/going to/

   At least the following two MIBs SHOULD be supported MIBs SHOULD be
   supported by nodes that support an SNMP agent.

==> forgot to finish rewording.


On Mon, 25 Aug 2003 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
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>       Title           : IPv6 Node Requirements
>       Author(s)       : J. Loughney
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-ipv6-node-requirements-05.txt
>       Pages           : 19
>       Date            : 2003-8-25
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