This is to begin a 4 week working group last call for 
draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis-06. The target status for this document is Proposed 
Standard, obsoleting RFC 4306 and RFC 4718.

Please send your comments to the ipsec list by Jan. 5, 2010, as follow-ups to 
this message.

This is a large document, and arguably the most important document this WG is 
entrusted with. The LC period is longer than usual but will include vacation 
time for most of us. Nevertheless, please make an effort to review the entire 
document, or at least large portions of it. Feel free to post multiple partial 
reviews.

In this particular case, we are starting the review with a few open 
issues<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/ipsecme/trac/query?status=new&status=assigned&status=reopened&component=draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis>.
 We will make an effort to close them during the WG LC period.

As a reminder regarding the document's scope (and our constraints while 
reviewing it), I will quote from my mail of Aug. 2008:

General: The goal of the IKEv2 bis document is to clarify the protocol. The 
goal is not to extend it. Specifically:


* The document will combine RFC 4306 (IKEv2) and RFC 4718 (IKEv2 
clarifications), but no other RFCs.
* The document will add clarifications based on the community's deployment 
experience.
* It is OK to correct minor technical errors and contradictions in the source 
documents. Any such corrections will be pointed out explicitly - preferably in 
an appendix (so that people using the old documents can scan it to discover 
problem areas).
* The document will not add any "nice to have" extensions, no matter how much 
technical sense they make.

Please clearly indicate the position of any issue in the Internet Draft, and if 
possible provide alternative text. Please also indicate the nature or severity 
of the error or correction, e.g. major technical, minor technical, nit, so that 
we can quickly judge the extent of problems with the document.

The document can be accessed here:

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis-06

Thanks,
      Yaron
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