This is a small editorial change, and should be accepted. The RFC Editor should add this change to its internal style guide for IPsec-related documents.
--Paul Hoffman On May 8, 2013, at 6:05 AM, RFC Errata System <[email protected]> wrote: > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6311, > "Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6311&eid=3615 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Yoav Nir <[email protected]> > > Section: 6.4 > > Original Text > ------------- > Note that this solution requires that either all Child > SAs > use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESNs) or else that no Child SA uses > ESNs. > > Corrected Text > -------------- > Note that this solution requires that either all Child > SAs > use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESN) or else that no Child SA uses > ESN. > > Notes > ----- > "ESN" is used here as a name of a feature. There is no need to pluralize it. > This is different from "SAs" or "SPIs", where there are many of each. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC6311 (draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsecha-protocol-06) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec > Publication Date : July 2011 > Author(s) : R. Singh, Ed., G. Kalyani, Y. Nir, Y. Sheffer, D. Zhang > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : IP Security Maintenance and Extensions > Area : Security > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG > _______________________________________________ > IPsec mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec > _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
