Hi Tero,
thanks for catching these typos and gramma errors.
Valery.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Tero Kivinen" <kivi...@iki.fi>
To: <ipsec@ietf.org>
Sent: Monday, March 03, 2014 8:25 PM
Subject: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05
I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.
Nits:
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In appendix A:
The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
s/looking valid/valid looking/
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... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
^^^^^^
not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
^^^^^
s/forgeg/forged/
s/fetch/store/
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kivi...@iki.fi
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