Sure.

On 06/14/2015 02:11 PM, Yoav Nir wrote:
How about:

OLD:
    The Pad Length field need not exceed 4 octets. However, RFC 4303 and this 
specification do not
    prohibit using greater pad lengths.

NEW:
    The length of the Padding field need not exceed 4 octets. However, neither 
RFC 4303 nor this
    specification require using the minimal padding length.

Yoav

On Jun 14, 2015, at 10:37 AM, Yaron Sheffer <[email protected]> wrote:

Quick nit: the sentence "The Pad Length field need not exceed 4 octets" is a bit 
confusing, because the Pad Length field is obviously a constant 2 octets. I would suggest "The 
Padding field's length (and the value of the Pad Length field) need not exceed 4 octets."

Thanks,
        Yaron

On 06/14/2015 09:46 AM, [email protected] wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
  This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions 
Working Group of the IETF.

         Title           : ChaCha20, Poly1305 and their use in IKE & IPsec
         Author          : Yoav Nir
        Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09.txt
        Pages           : 12
        Date            : 2015-06-13

Abstract:
    This document describes the use of the ChaCha20 stream cipher along
    with the Poly1305 authenticator, combined into an AEAD algorithm for
    the Internet Key Exchange protocol (IKEv2) and for IPsec.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305/

There's also a htmlized version available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

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