I think the two "may" entries and the "should" in the following sentence should be capitalized.
Regards, Dave ________________________________ From: IPsec <[email protected]> on behalf of Tommy Pauly <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, July 18, 2018 4:28:30 PM To: IPsecME WG; Eric Rescorla Subject: Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns-10.txt Hello all, This new rev of the Split DNS document includes the feedback from our WG discussion today for handling of the DNSSEC domain whitelist. Please take a look! The document should be ready to progress at this point. Best, Tommy > On Jul 18, 2018, at 4:26 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions WG of > the IETF. > > Title : Split DNS Configuration for IKEv2 > Authors : Tommy Pauly > Paul Wouters > Filename : draft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns-10.txt > Pages : 13 > Date : 2018-07-18 > > Abstract: > This document defines two Configuration Payload Attribute Types for > the IKEv2 protocol that add support for private DNS domains. These > domains are intended to be resolved using DNS servers reachable > through an IPsec connection, while leaving all other DNS resolution > unchanged. This approach of resolving a subset of domains using non- > public DNS servers is referred to as "Split DNS". > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns%2F&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=k%2F6Juy9hDJucBOTXoJgrwBeVfzw6iL3JcOsH1oP%2F4rk%3D&reserved=0 > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns-10&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=anQJZuOh9jiwQY0DRjnkJF9t6rwoKUnCTkTtGD4pRjI%3D&reserved=0 > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns-10&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=3%2FHdtPgHVzi%2B1gXSLO7m029WGCUJM2p0w940mZ8uH4I%3D&reserved=0 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-ipsecme-split-dns-10&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=b6TiXdCbVieE5xT7lx3gludJT3DZi%2FyCpEkYXPb3Bx4%3D&reserved=0 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > IPsec mailing list > [email protected] > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fipsec&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=X%2FXEIPG%2BAZH5dG7EzMMZrRs5YsvxxujN8roweX15YHs%3D&reserved=0 _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list [email protected] https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf..org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fipsec&data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Cff7ef1c6c1be4bdf912608d5eced14e3%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636675425355607080&sdata=X%2FXEIPG%2BAZH5dG7EzMMZrRs5YsvxxujN8roweX15YHs%3D&reserved=0
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