On Sat, 18 Mar 2023, Roman Danyliw wrote: Hi Roman,
Thanks for the AD review.
I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-09. Thanks for the work on this document. I have a few editorial recommendations that can be handled concurrently to IETF Last Call. ** Section 2.2. s/it MUST not install/it MUST NOT install/ since "MUST no" is not a keyword
Fixed.
** Is repeating this (and related) normative guidance needed: -- Section 2.2: "The TS_SECLABEL Traffic Selector Type MUST NOT be the only TS_TYPE present in the TS payload." -- Section 3: "TS_SECLABEL MUST NOT be used without another TS_TYPE in a Traffic Selector Payload, as it does not specify a complete set of traffic selectors on its own."
I've removed the quoted sentence from Section 2.2 (but left the "related" sentence there as it shows which error notify type to return. Changes will be in version -10. Paul _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
