Fred, Sorry for replying late. I don't have any objections to the change that you are suggesting and I agree that it will make it clearer.
If I don't hear any objections, I will make this change in the next revision. Regards Mukesh -----Original Message----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of ext Fred Templin Sent: Friday, June 25, 2004 11:34 AM To: Brian Haberman Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Re: IPv6 WG Last Call: draft-ietf-ipngwg-icmp-v3-04.txt Brian, Sorry to come in so late with this, but I have a comment on this document. In several diagrams, we see the phrase: "As much of invoking packet as will fit without the ICMPv6 packet exceeding the minimum IPv6 MTU" (A variation of this phrase also appears in section 2.4 (c), accompanied by an even stronger "MUST include".) In each of these instances, I would like to see: "will fit" replaced by "possible", as in: "As much of invoking packet as possible without the ICMPv6 packet exceeding the minimum IPv6 MTU" Reason is that: "will fit" is redundant with: "without ... exceeding the minimum IPv6 MTU". Secondly, "will fit" when accompanied by "MUST include as much of the IPv6 offending (invoking) packet" in section 2.4 (c) seems to presume that all implementations will be able to efficiently access up to 1280 bytes of the offending packet when generating the error, and in some cases this may not be possible. Fred [EMAIL PROTECTED] Brian Haberman wrote: > All, > The last call actually ends on June 18, 2004 not May 18. > > Regards, > Brian > > Brian Haberman wrote: > >> All, >> This starts a 2-week IPv6 Working Group Last Call on: >> >> Title : Internet Control Message Protocol (ICMPv6)for the >> Internet Protocol Version 6 (IPv6) Specification >> Author(s) : A. Conta, S. Deering >> Filename : draft-ietf-ipngwg-icmp-v3-04.txt >> Pages : 26 >> Date : 2004-6-3 >> >> This document is being re-cycled at Draft Standard. The last call >> will end on May 18, 2004. Substantive comments should be directed >> to the mailing list. Editorial comments may be sent to the list or >> the editor. >> >> Regards, >> Bob & Brian >> IPv6 WG co-chairs >> >> >> >> >> -------------------------------------------------------------------- >> IETF IPv6 working group mailing list >> [EMAIL PROTECTED] >> Administrative Requests: https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 >> -------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > IETF IPv6 working group mailing list > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Administrative Requests: https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 > -------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] Administrative Requests: https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 -------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] Administrative Requests: https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
