Hi, Thomas, The text looks good to me.
Only a minor possible nit bellow: > The current set of mandatory-to-implement algorithms for the IP > Security Architcture are defined in 'Cryptographic Algorithm > Implementation Requirements For ESP and AH' [RFC4835]. IPv6 nodes > implementing the IP Security Architecture MUST conform to the > requirements in [RFC4835]. Preferred cryptographic algorithms often > change more frequently than security protocols. Therefore > implementations MUST allow for migration into new algorithms, as > RFC4835 is replaced or updated in the future. Shouldn't it be "migration to" rather than "migration into"? Thanks, -- Fernando Gont e-mail: [email protected] || [email protected] PGP Fingerprint: 7809 84F5 322E 45C7 F1C9 3945 96EE A9EF D076 FFF1 -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list [email protected] Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
