On 14.12.2015 00:22, Ben Hildred wrote: > I wrote http://ipxe.org/appnote/debian_preseed becouse it was not at all > obvous how to do this, and thought it may help someone else. I figured > we should probably add a link to it from the documentation page, which I > do not have permission to change. please feel free to criticise. I will > gladly make any improvements needed to improve clarity.
Nice of you to write up that. The third paragraph is a bit convoluted in language (start with "EFI presents a couple..") and could be simplified. It would also be beneficial if you actually add a proper title to the page. The two first code blocks should also be labeled as BIOS and EFI, and the last as best combined solution, so people that skim the page quickly can find the one they want. It would also be beneficial if the most correct version is at the top of the page, because we all know people never read the entire article. ;) Once you've added a decent title I'll add it to the documentation page. -- Robin _______________________________________________ ipxe-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ipxe.org/mailman/listinfo.cgi/ipxe-devel
