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ASF GitHub Bot logged work on BEAM-13976:
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Author: ASF GitHub Bot
Created on: 08/Mar/22 00:45
Start Date: 08/Mar/22 00:45
Worklog Time Spent: 10m
Work Description: pcoet commented on a change in pull request #16919:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/16919#discussion_r821221354
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File path: website/www/site/data/en/graphic.yaml
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@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@
# See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
# limitations under the License.
-- title: Sources
+- title: Data Sourcing
body: Beam reads your data from a diverse set of supported sources, no
matter if it’s on-prem or in the cloud.
icon: /images/model-sources-icon.svg
-- title: Processing
- body: Beam executes your business logic for Batch and Streaming use cases.
Review comment:
There's no need to capitalize "Batch" and "Streaming".
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/logos/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
# limitations under the License.
- id: home-logos-title
- translation: "Supported runners"
\ No newline at end of file
+ translation: "Apache Beam Runs in These Environments"
Review comment:
Prefer sentence case: "Apache Beam runs in these environments"
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/quotes/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
# limitations under the License.
- id: home-quotes-title
- translation: "They tried it out"
\ No newline at end of file
+ translation: "Case Studies Powered by Apache Beam"
Review comment:
"Case studies powered by Apache Beam"
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/hero/en.yaml
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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
- id: home-hero-title
translation: Introducing Apache Beam
- id: home-hero-heading
- translation: An advanced unified programming model
+ translation: The Unified Apache Beam Model
- id: home-hero-subheading
- translation: Implement batch and streaming data processing jobs that run on
any execution engine.
+ translation: The easiest way to do batch and streaming data processing.
Write once, run anywhere data processing for mission-critical production
workloads.
- id: home-hero-button
- translation: Install Beam
+ translation: Link to GitHub Repo
Review comment:
"Link to GitHub repo"
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/en.yaml
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@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
- id: home-ctas-title
translation: "Get started"
- id: home-model-title1
- translation: "How Does it work?"
+ translation: "How Does It Work?"
Review comment:
I'd use sentence case ("How does it work?") instead of title case, but
this is okay too... better than the previous inconsistent usage.
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/calendar/en.yaml
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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
# limitations under the License.
- id: home-calendar-title
- translation: "Stay up to date with Beam"
+ translation: "Stay Up To Date with Beam"
Review comment:
I'd stick with sentence case instead of title case, but feel free to
ignore...
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/en.yaml
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@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@
- id: home-ctas-title
translation: "Get started"
- id: home-model-title1
- translation: "How Does it work?"
+ translation: "How Does It Work?"
- id: home-model-title2
- translation: "Write it in your language of choice - run it anywhere"
+ translation: "You Choose Your Favorite Environment and Programming Language!"
Review comment:
I'd recommend sentence case instead of title case here.
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/pillars/en.yaml
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@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
# limitations under the License.
- id: home-pillars-title
- translation: "All about Apache Beam"
+ translation: "Apache Beam Features"
Review comment:
"Apache Beam features"
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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/hero/en.yaml
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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
- id: home-hero-title
translation: Introducing Apache Beam
- id: home-hero-heading
- translation: An advanced unified programming model
+ translation: The Unified Apache Beam Model
Review comment:
I'd recommend sentence case here: "The unified Apache Beam model".
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Issue Time Tracking
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Worklog Id: (was: 737885)
Time Spent: 4h 40m (was: 4.5h)
> [Website] Update Home page
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>
> Key: BEAM-13976
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/BEAM-13976
> Project: Beam
> Issue Type: Improvement
> Components: website
> Reporter: Aydar Zaynutdinov
> Assignee: Bulat Safiullin
> Priority: P3
> Labels: website, website-update-sprint-1, website-update-sprint-2
> Time Spent: 4h 40m
> Remaining Estimate: 0h
>
> Need to update Home page according to TDD:
> * Header (update text)
> * Button to install Beam (change link)
> * Beam Model (update place and text)
> * Apache Beam Features (update place and text)
> * Apache Beam Runs in These Environments (update place and text)
> * They Tried It Out (update place and text)
> * Twitter, Blog, and Event Cal Plug-ins (update place)
> * Remove menu for the mobile version
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