breautek commented on a change in pull request #1133:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cordova-ios/pull/1133#discussion_r706956510



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@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 # to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
 # "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
 # with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
-# 
+#

Review comment:
       I'd avoid making changes to the LICENSE blurps... we have scripts that 
scans files and this may trip a complaint. Not sure if these run on markdown 
files or not... but better safe than sorry.

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@@ -47,20 +47,24 @@ cordova platform add --link /path/to/cordova-ios
 
 ## Updating a Cordova project
 
-When you install a new `cordova-cli` version that comes with a new iOS 
platform version, from within your project:
+When you install a new version of the [`Cordova 
CLI`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/cordova) that pins a new version of the 
[`Cordova-iOS`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/cordova-ios) platform, you can 
follow these simple upgrade steps within your project:

Review comment:
       I think it's better to reference `Cordova-iOS` as the package name 
literally, `cordova-ios`, which also makes this consistent with other parts of 
the docs, such as:
   
   > link the appropriate cordova-ios platform folder path:
   
   ```suggestion
   When you install a new version of the [`Cordova 
CLI`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/cordova) that pins a new version of the 
[`cordova-ios`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/cordova-ios) platform, you can 
follow these simple upgrade steps within your project:
   ```

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@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 # to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
 # "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
 # with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
-# 
+#
 # http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
-# 
+#

Review comment:
       same as above




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