fhueske commented on a change in pull request #9694: [hotfix] [docs] Fixes in 
glossar
URL: https://github.com/apache/flink/pull/9694#discussion_r330004353
 
 

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 File path: docs/concepts/glossary.md
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 @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ whole [Flink Master](#flink-master) was called JobManager.
 #### Logical Graph
 
 A logical graph is a directed graph describing the high-level logic of a 
stream processing program.
-The nodes are [Operators](#operator) and the edges indicate 
input/output-relationships or
 
 Review comment:
   I agree with Stephan. "... input/output-relationships of data streams or 
data sets" does not seem right to me. The edges describe the relationships of 
*operators* but not of *data streams/sets*. 
   
   You're probably correct that this part was copy/pasted. In the original 
sentence, the words belong together as follows: "(input/output-relationships) 
or (partitions of data streams or data sets)". Since, a logical graph is not 
parallelized, the "partitions of" was removed. 
   
   Although correct, I agree that "input/output-relationships or data streams 
or data sets." doesn't sound good and could be improved. How about:
   
   > ... the edges indicate input/output-relationships of the operators and 
correspond to data streams or data sets.

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