Myasuka commented on a change in pull request #17686:
URL: https://github.com/apache/flink/pull/17686#discussion_r762671160



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File path: docs/content/docs/ops/monitoring/checkpoint_monitoring.md
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@@ -65,8 +65,7 @@ Note that for failed checkpoints, metrics are updated on a 
best efforts basis an
 - **Latest Acknowledgement**: The time when the latest acknowledgement for any 
subtask was received at the JobManager (or n/a if no acknowledgement received 
yet).
 - **End to End Duration**: The duration from the trigger timestamp until the 
latest acknowledgement (or n/a if no acknowledgement received yet). This end to 
end duration for a complete checkpoint is determined by the last subtask that 
acknowledges the checkpoint. This time is usually larger than single subtasks 
need to actually checkpoint the state.
 - **Checkpointed Data Size**: The checkpointed data size over all acknowledged 
subtasks. If incremental checkpointing is enabled this value is the 
checkpointed data size delta.
-- **Processed in-flight data**: The approximate number of bytes processed 
during the alignment (time between receiving the first and the last checkpoint 
barrier) over all acknowledged subtasks.
-- **Persisted in-flight data**: The number of bytes persisted during the 
alignment (time between receiving the first and the last checkpoint barrier) 
over all acknowledged subtasks. This is > 0 only if the unaligned checkpoints 
are enabled.
+- **Processed (persisted) in-flight data**: The approximate number of bytes 
processed during the alignment (time between receiving the first and the last 
checkpoint barrier) over all acknowledged subtasks. `persisted in-flight 
data`in round brackets mean the number of bytes persisted during the alignment 
(time between receiving the first and the last checkpoint barrier) over all 
acknowledged subtasks. This is > 0 only if the unaligned checkpoints are 
enabled.

Review comment:
       I think statement below looks better:
   `The approximate number of bytes processed (persisted) during the alignment 
(time between receiving the first and the last checkpoint barrier) over all 
acknowledged subtasks. Persisted data could be larger than zero only if the 
unaligned checkpoints are enabled.`




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