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xiangyu feng edited comment on FLINK-33235 at 10/12/23 11:37 AM:
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[~martijnvisser] Hi Martjin, thx for your comment. I see your point now and I
agree with you on this. However, I still want to improve this doc in following
ways:
1, After checking the
[https://flink.apache.org/how-to-contribute/documentation-style-guide/,|https://flink.apache.org/how-to-contribute/documentation-style-guide/]
we should use 'active voice' and 'you' instead of 'passive voice' and 'we' in
the doc;
2, Add architecture graphs in this doc;
3, Fix typos and misconfigured options in this doc;
4, Add notes to explain that some OLAP features may have not released yet, user
can choose to build from the master branch;
I will change the tittle and description accordingly, WDYT?
was (Author: JIRAUSER301129):
[~martijnvisser] Hi Martjin, thx for your comment. I see your point now and I
agree with you on this. However, I still want to improve this doc in following
ways:
1, After checking the [Documentation
Guide|[https://flink.apache.org/how-to-contribute/documentation-style-guide/],]
we should use 'active voice' and 'you' instead of 'passive voice' and 'we' in
the doc;
2, Add architecture graphs in this doc;
3, Fix typos and misconfigured options in this doc;
4, Add notes to explain that some OLAP features may have not released yet, user
can choose to build from the master branch;
I will change the tittle and description accordingly, WDYT?
> Improve the Quickstart guide for Flink OLAP
> -------------------------------------------
>
> Key: FLINK-33235
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FLINK-33235
> Project: Flink
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: xiangyu feng
> Assignee: xiangyu feng
> Priority: Major
>
> 1, Follow the [Documentation
> Guide|[https://flink.apache.org/how-to-contribute/documentation-style-guide/]],
> use 'active voice' and 'you' instead of 'passive voice' and 'we' in the doc;
> 2, Add architecture graphs in the doc;
> 3, Fix typos and misconfigured options in the doc;
> 4, Add notes to explain that some OLAP features may have not been released
> yet, user can choose to build from the master branch;
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