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ASF GitHub Bot commented on GEODE-4063:
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semioticrobotic commented on code in PR #26:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode-site/pull/26#discussion_r2383213637


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website/content/index.html:
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@@ -23,24 +23,13 @@
         <div class="container">
             <img class="logo-title img-responsive hidden-xs" 
src="img/Apache_Geode_logo.png" />
             <div class="text-container">
-                <h2 class="tagline"><em>Performance</em> is key. 
<em>Consistency</em> is a must.</h2>
-                <p class="description">Providing low latency, high concurrency 
data management solutions since 2002.</p>
-                <p class="description">Build high-speed, data-intensive 
applications that elastically meet performance requirements at any scale.</p>
-                               <p class="description">Take advantage of Apache 
Geode's unique technology that blends advanced techniques for data replication, 
partitioning and distributed processing.</p>
-                               <p class="description">Apache Geode provides a 
database-like consistency model, reliable transaction processing, and a 
shared-nothing architecture to maintain very low latency performance with high 
concurrency processing.</p>
+                <p class="description">Apache Geode™ is a data management 
platform that provides real-time, consistent access to data-intensive 
applications throughout widely distributed cloud architectures.</p>

Review Comment:
   That said, I was partial to:
   
   > Providing low latency, high concurrency data management solutions since 
2002
   
   So you'll see I made that slogan the new page title 😄 





> Update trademarks on website
> ----------------------------
>
>                 Key: GEODE-4063
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-4063
>             Project: Geode
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: website
>            Reporter: Anthony Baker
>            Assignee: Bryan Behrenshausen
>            Priority: Major
>
> Make sure that the Geode website use of ASF trademarks is consistent with:
> https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/resources
> In particular we should update the homepage and download page to include TM 
> after the both the first and most prominent uses of "Apache Geode" in headers 
> or running text.



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