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ASF GitHub Bot commented on GEODE-655:
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GitHub user karensmolermiller opened a pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-geode/pull/55

    GEODE-655 Website sentence needs improvement

    The first sentence on the http://geode.incubator.apache.org/ web page means 
something different than intended. The sentence says
    "Solving low latency data management problems at very high concurrency 
since 2002."
    
    Low latency modifies data management problems. Because of this, the 
sentence implies that the problems being solved are ones that exhibit low 
latency. This is the opposite of what is intended.
    
    This pull request implements a better wording for that sentence:
    Providing low latency, high concurrency data management solutions since 
2002.

You can merge this pull request into a Git repository by running:

    $ git pull https://github.com/karensmolermiller/incubator-geode 
feature/GEODE-655

Alternatively you can review and apply these changes as the patch at:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-geode/pull/55.patch

To close this pull request, make a commit to your master/trunk branch
with (at least) the following in the commit message:

    This closes #55
    
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commit f86ddd4dc32a78a84d186cbc01fa3dccce060340
Author: Karen Miller <[email protected]>
Date:   2015-12-11T17:30:35Z

    GEODE-655 Website sentence needs improvement
    
    The first sentence intends the opposite of what it says. Thus, it
    should be changed.

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> Geode web page sentence should be better worded
> -----------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: GEODE-655
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-655
>             Project: Geode
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: web-content
>            Reporter: Karen Smoler Miller
>
> The first sentence on the http://geode.incubator.apache.org/ web page means 
> something different than intended.  The sentence says
> _"Solving low latency data management problems at very high concurrency since 
> 2002."_
> Low latency modifies data management problems. Because of this, the sentence 
> implies that the problems being solved are ones that exhibit low latency.  
> This is the opposite of what is intended.
> Here is a better wording for that sentence:
> _Providing low latency, high concurrency data management solutions since 
> 2002._
> Pull request to make this change will follow.



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