imbajin commented on PR #258:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/incubator-hugegraph-doc/pull/258#issuecomment-1574834783

   Some translation could be improved by `GPT/New Bing`, try to paste the 
phrase and ask it for the improvement~ 🤖 
   <img width="1024" alt="image" 
src="https://github.com/apache/incubator-hugegraph-doc/assets/17706099/29043e6e-fd24-47c4-b4c8-6417d4b36e44";>
   
   <details>
   <summary>GPT Improvement Example </summary>
   
   Here are some suggestions for improving the markdown English description:
   
   - In the first sentence, you can use "an email list" instead of "email list" 
to be more grammatically correct.
   - In the second bullet point, you can use "for both development and user 
discussions" instead of "for development and users discussions" to avoid 
confusion between singular and plural forms.
   - In the third sentence, you can use "the following steps" instead of 
"following steps" to be more specific.
   - In the fourth sentence, you can use "a reply" instead of "the confirmation 
email" to avoid repetition.
   - In the fifth sentence, you can use "another confirmation email" instead of 
"another email" to be more clear.
   - In the seventh sentence, you can use "anytime you want" instead of 
"anytime you want" to be more natural.
   - In the ninth bullet point, you can use "send an email" instead of "send 
mail" to be more consistent with the rest of the text.
   - In the last sentence, you can use "More information about subscribing to 
mailing lists can be found at:" instead of "More information of mailing 
subscribe can be found at:" to be more grammatical and accurate.
   
   The improved paragraph is:
   
   ### Subscribe to the mailing list
   
   HugeGraph offers an email list for development and user discussions. 
   - hugegraph-dev: 
[[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]) for both 
development and user discussions.
   
   Subscribe to the mailing list by following these steps:
   - Email 
[[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]) 
from your email account, and then you will receive a confirmation email.
   - Reply to the confirmation email to confirm your subscription. Then, you 
will receive another confirmation email.
   - Now you are a subscriber of the mailing list. If you have more questions, 
just email to the mailing list and someone will reply to you soon.
   - If you want to unsubscribe from the mailing list, just email 
[[email protected]](mailto:[email protected])
 and follow the steps in the confirmation email.
   
   You can subscribe to the mailing list anytime you want. Additionally, you 
can check [historical emails / all 
emails](https://lists.apache.org/[email protected]) easily 
(even if you are not subscribed to the list).
   
   Some notes:
   - If you don't receive the confirmation email, please send an email after 24 
hours later.
   - Don't send an email to **dev** until you subscribe to the mailing list 
successfully (otherwise the email will be banned).
   
   More information about subscribing to mailing lists can be found at:
   - http://apache.org/foundation/mailinglists.html#subscribing
   
   </details>
   
   
   BTW, could click `Resolve Conversation` after u addressed the comment. 


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