imbajin commented on code in PR #412:
URL:
https://github.com/apache/incubator-hugegraph-doc/pull/412#discussion_r2444643572
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+---
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+title: "HugeGraph Toolchain Local Testing Guide"
+linkTitle: "Toolchain Local Testing"
+weight: 7
+---
+
+This guide aims to help developers efficiently run tests for the HugeGraph
toolchain in a local environment, covering the processes of compiling
sub-projects, installing dependent services, running tests, and generating
coverage reports.
+
+## 1. Foreword and Core Concepts
+
+### 1.1 Core Dependency: HugeGraph Server
+
+In the testing of the HugeGraph toolchain, **HugeGraph Server is the core
dependency for the vast majority of integration and functional tests**. It
provides the core services of the graph database, and many components in the
toolchain (such as Client, Loader, Hubble, Spark Connector, Tools) need to
interact with the Server to perform their functions and be tested. Therefore, a
properly configured and running HugeGraph Server is a prerequisite for complete
functional testing. This guide will explain how to install/build HugeGraph
Server in the sections below.
+
Review Comment:
**拼写和语法问题**: 英文文档中发现多处可以改进的地方。
**发现的问题**:
Line 15:
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**HugeGraph Server is the core dependency for the vast majority of
integration and functional tests**
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建议改为:
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**HugeGraph Server is the core dependency for most integration and
functional tests**
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("vast majority" 过于强调)
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They are used to simulate user scenarios or business processes, involve the
interaction of multiple components
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建议改为:
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They simulate user scenarios or business processes and involve interactions
between multiple components
```
(使用并列结构更清晰)
**通用建议**:
- 使用语法检查工具(如Grammarly)检查英文文档
- 保持句式简洁,避免过长的复合句
- 技术文档建议使用主动语态
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