skytin1004 commented on code in PR #7548:
URL: https://github.com/apache/iceberg/pull/7548#discussion_r1188012567


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docs/aws.md:
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@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ This client factory has the following configurable catalog 
properties:
 | client.assume-role.arn            | null, requires user input                
| ARN of the role to assume, e.g. arn:aws:iam::123456789:role/myRoleToAssume  |
 | client.assume-role.region         | null, requires user input                
| All AWS clients except the STS client will use the given region instead of 
the default region chain  |
 | client.assume-role.external-id    | null                                     
| An optional [external 
ID](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/IAM/latest/UserGuide/id_roles_create_for-user_externalid.html)
  |
-| client.assume-role.timeout-sec    | 1 hour                                   
| Timeout of each assume role session. At the end of the timeout, a new set of 
role session credentials will be fetched through a STS client.  |
+| client.assume-role.timeout-sec    | 1 hour                                   
| Timeout of each assume role session. At the end of the timeout, a new set of 
role session credentials will be fetched through an STS client.  |

Review Comment:
   Before abbreviations like SEO or UN, write a or an, depending on the sound 
of the first letter. For example, S is a consonant but pronounced /e/, so you 
would write "an SEO expert", and U is a vowel but pronounced /j/, so you would 
write "a UN declaration".
   
   Likewise STS would be pronounced as "ess-tee-ess". In this case S is a 
consonant but pronounced /e/.
   
   
   I've included links below that you might find helpful.
   
https://editorsmanual.com/articles/indefinite-article-a-an-with-abbreviations/
   
   Thank you for your attention to detail.



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