sebbASF commented on issue #20: Mangled sentence URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator-milagro/issues/20#issuecomment-531179299 It's better, but still a bit hard to read. The following phrase: "the need for a PKI infrastructure as the main reason to issue certificates" would read better as "the need for a PKI infrastructure, since the main reason to issue certificates" As it stands, the "as" clause is ambiguous. It could be taken in the sense of "Using another system as a backup". The word "since" does not have that double meaning, and the comma helps too.
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