https://issues.apache.org/ooo/show_bug.cgi?id=122905

[email protected] changed:

           What    |Removed                     |Added
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             Status|RESOLVED                    |REOPENED
         Resolution|FIXED                       |---

--- Comment #6 from [email protected] ---
Thanks, however there are still some problems:

The following statement is not strictly true:

"A hash value processed on the downloaded file is a way to make sure that the
content is authentic and was not manipulated by an unauthorized third party"

Hashes should only be used to check that a download has completed OK.
They are not suitable for content authentication.

The following sentence does not read well:
>>When both signatures match it is indicated with an "Good signature from 
>><Person who has created the signature> statement.<<.

There is only one signature; "both" does not make sense here. It should
probably read something like:

>>If the signature matches the file this is show by the message "Good signature 
>>from <Person who has created the signature>."<<

It is wrong to insist that Windows users download a specific hashing tool;
there are lots of other tools that are suitable.

"Please try again a download to get a valid file." - should read:
"Please try the download again, and recheck. If the check still fails, try
another browser if possible. Check also that the file size is correct."

"Please consult the respective help " => "Please consult the relevant help "

"Be aware that all mails do not go to a single person but a so-called mailing
list." =>  "Please note that all mails go to a public mailing list, not an
individual."

It would be helpful if the following text were actually a link:

http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS

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