cottage14 opened a new pull request, #95: URL: https://github.com/apache/tooling-docs/pull/95
line 4: change 'the' to 'its' line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable. lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference line 39: add comma after 'management' line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
