ocket8888 commented on a change in pull request #3977: TP: Adds Server 
Capabilities UI
URL: https://github.com/apache/trafficcontrol/pull/3977#discussion_r334704697
 
 

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+.. _server_capability:
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+**************************
+Manage Server Capabilities
+**************************
+Server capabilities are designed to enable system operators to control the 
flow of delivery service traffic through caches (Edges or Mids) with ONLY the 
required capabilities. For example, delivery services that serve large binary 
files should only be routed to caches with sufficient disk cache. Currently, 
this can be controlled at the Edge tier where system operators can explicitly 
assign only Edge caches with sufficient disk cache to the delivery service. 
However, the system operators do not have control of the Mid tier and cannot 
dictate which Mid caches are qualified to serve these large binary files. This 
will cause a problem if a Mid cache with insufficient disk cache is asked to 
serve the large binary files.
 
 Review comment:
   You've got a bunch of unlinked `term`s in here: "delivery service", "cache" 
(should be "cache server" in many cases), maybe a couple of others.
   Verbal stress on a word in a sentence should be indicated with emphasis 
roles. Typically you'd do that with asterisks:
   ```rst
   *this text is emphasized*
   ```
   What's an "operator"? I think you mean
   ```rst
   ... users with the "operator" :term:`Role` ("operators") ...
   ```

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