sebastien.lelong commented on revision r1517 in project jallib.
Details are at http://code.google.com/p/jallib/source/detail?r=1517

Score: Neutral

General Comment:
Hi Matt,

I've seen few JSG non-compliant things in your doc, mainly about spaces  
before () in calls, and _USEC_DELAY that should be lowercase

Cheers,
Seb

Line-by-line comments:

File: /trunk/doc/dita/tutorials/tutorial_pata_hard_disk.xml (r1517)
===============================================================================

Line 328: send_word (13, 10)</codeblock>
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
no space between send_word and ()

Line 335:    _USEC_DELAY (5_000_000) -- 5 sec delay
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
no space before ()
_usec_delay should be lowercased (not a constant). check other calls

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