sebastien.lelong commented on revision r2194 in project jallib.
Details are at http://code.google.com/p/jallib/source/detail?r=2194

Score: Positive

General Comment:
Hi Matt,
I've had a look at your code, here are some suggestions and questions I have.

Cheers,
Seb

Line-by-line comments:

File: /trunk/project/slip_networking/18f4620_ping.jal (r2194)
===============================================================================

Line 17: include 18f4550                    -- target PICmicro
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then file should be renamed to 18f4550_ping.jal ?

Line 82:    end loop
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
why sending fifty "0" ?

Line 140: var byte icmp_message[8] = {0b00001000, 0, 0b11110111, 0b11111110, 0, 1, 0, 0}
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could you give more information about this icmp_message ? Is this "Echo or Echo reply Message" in http://www.faqs.org/rfcs/rfc792.html, page 13 ?

Line 151: network_send_data(icmp_message[count1]) -- send slip packet data via serial port
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
you can say:

for 8 using count1 loop
...
end loop

See: http://casadeyork.com/jalv2/jalv2/x552.html

Line 160:    _usec_delay(1_000_000)
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Is this is avoid DOS attack ? :))

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