Hmmm. The overload was intended to simplify the call in two places; it hardly
seems worth it if it is only used in one place.  But it can stay.

Suggest the following rewrite of the doc comment in HtmlDocletWriter.java

1309     /**
1310      * Converts inline tags and text to Content, expanding the
1311      * inline tags along the way.  Called wherever text can contain
1312      * an inline tag, such as in comments or in free-form text arguments
1313      * to block tags.
1314      *
1315      * @param holderTag  specific tag where comment resides
1316      * @param element    specific element where comment resides
1317      * @param tags       array of text tags and inline tags (often 
alternating)
1318      *                   present in the text of interest for this element
1319      * @param isFirstSentence  true if text is first sentence
1320      * @param inSummary  true if the comment tags are added into the 
summary section
1321      * @return a Content object
1322      */

Bonus points if you also do the equivalent clean up the comment in the preceding method,
lines 1291-to 1303. :-)

No need to re-review if you just change this text.

-- Jon

On 09/20/2018 10:07 PM, Priya Lakshmi Muthuswamy wrote:

Hi Jon,

Yes as you mentioned, I didn't make a change between webrev.00 to webrev.01 in ModuleWriterImpl.java. The reason I mentioned it because, in the first review you had suggested me to use an overload for commentTagsToContent and use that in DocFilesHandlerImpl.java and ModuleWriterImpl.java, rather than making changes in these two files.

So in webrev.01, I added the overload for commentTagsToContent. I removed the changes made in DocFilesHandlerImpl.java, but retained the change in ModuleWriterImpl.java.
To explained why I retained the change, I mentioned that comment.
/In ModuleWriterImpl, since we are writing to module summary, set the inSummary parameter to true. /_

_I'm sorry if I was not clear in my explanation.

Thanks,
Priya

On 9/21/2018 5:40 AM, Jonathan Gibbons wrote:
Priya,

You have expanded more on what your comment means, but you've not explained why
you are telling me this.

In particular, note the following two aspects of your revised review request

1. You wrote:
updated webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~pmuthuswamy/8202462/webrev.01/ In ModuleWriterImpl, since we are writing to module summary, set the inSummary parameter to true.

2. But you did not modify ModuleWriterImpl in webrev.01 compared to webrev.00. In particular, this horribly long command shows you did not make any additional changes to ModuleWriterImpl.java in webrev.01 $ diff cr.openjdk.java.net/~pmuthuswamy/8202462/webrev.0{0,1}/raw_files/new/src/jdk.javadoc/share/classes/jdk/javadoc/internal/doclets/formats/html/ModuleWriterImpl.java


So, since you have made a point of telling me about that change, I'm saying that I don't see that change in the updates you made to webrev.01. Conversely, if you didn't mean to make any additional change to ModuleWriterImpl.java, then why did you go out of your way to mention the change?

-- Jon




On 09/19/2018 08:42 PM, Priya Lakshmi Muthuswamy wrote:

Hi Jon,

In ModuleWriterImpl, have set the last parameter(inSummary) to the value true
providesTrees.put(t, commentTagsToContent(tree, mdle, 
ch.getDescription(configuration, tree), false, true));
Since this method provides contents for the module summary file, set the inSummary value to true.

Thanks,
Priya
On 9/20/2018 6:11 AM, Jonathan Gibbons wrote:
Priya,

Sort-of OK, but can you explain more about your comment about ModuleWriterImpl:
In ModuleWriterImpl, since we are writing to module summary, set the inSummary parameter to true.

I don't see any change between your two webrevs in ModuleWriterImpl, and so I don't
understand what that comment means.

-- Jon




On 08/29/2018 06:07 AM, Priya Lakshmi Muthuswamy wrote:
Hi Jon,

Thanks for the comment.

updated webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~pmuthuswamy/8202462/webrev.01/ In ModuleWriterImpl, since we are writing to module summary, set the inSummary parameter to true.

Regards,
Priya

On 8/29/2018 5:42 AM, Jonathan Gibbons wrote:
DocFilesHandlerImpl.java

OK. It's a bit of a shame to have to edit this file. In HtmlDOcletWriter, you added an overload for getTagletWriterInstance, but not for commentTagsToContent.

HtmlDocletWriter.java

366: If you're going to add new javadoc comments, do it properly/correctly; don't just cut-n-paste something that was incomplete to begin with!

All the calls to addCommentTags are hard to read, with the growing number of boolean parameters. This is OK for now, but maybe we should used enums instead of booleans in some places to aid readability.

1221 you've added a parameter but not updated the doc comment. See next comment re: naming.

1233 summarySection ... suggest changing the name to be more like a predicate, such as "inSummary" or "isSummary"

ModuleWriterImpl.java

Same comment as for DocFilesHandlerImpl.java

TagletWriter.java

Instead of having a non-final field, you're better to have the first constructor call the second, like this:

   74     private final boolean summarySection;
   75
   76     public TagletWriterImpl(HtmlDocletWriter htmlWriter, boolean 
isFirstSentence) {
              this(htmlWriter, isFirstSentence, false);
   81     }
   82
   83     public TagletWriterImpl(HtmlDocletWriter htmlWriter, boolean 
isFirstSentence, boolean summarySection) {
   77         super(isFirstSentence);
   78         this.htmlWriter = htmlWriter;
   79         configuration = htmlWriter.configuration;
   80         this.utils = configuration.utils;
   85         this.summarySection = summarySection;
   86     }
various: in this file you're unnecessarily qualifying member references with "this.", as in code like this:
        if (this.isFirstSentence && this.summarySection)
That's not a coding style for javadoc or even JDK. Please remove unnecessary use of "this."

See previous comments about naming of "summarySection".

TestModules.java

OK

TestIndexTaglet.java

29: I'm mildly surprised that jtreg does not complain about the "@" in "@index", but OK if it doesn't

Overall, it's a pretty weak test. This is especially so when you look at lines 73-75.
   73         checkOrder("pkg/A.html",
   74                 "<h3>Method Summary</h3>\n",
   75                 "a");
What that is saying is, make sure that after the "Method Summary" heading, the character "a" appears. What are the chances of a false positive there? :-) The indexed term needs to be much more unique, such as "xyzzy" (look it up) or "Crumpets" or something. And then in line 75, expand the check to include what the word *should* be surrounded with. As written, the test would incorrectly succeed if the doclet incorrectly was not changed, because all you are checking for is the basic text, not the text in context.

-- Jon


On 08/14/2018 01:58 AM, Priya Lakshmi Muthuswamy wrote:
Hi,

Kindly review the fix for https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8202462
webrev : http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~pmuthuswamy/8202462/webrev.00/

Thanks,
Priya







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