Bugs item #546116, was opened at 2002-04-19 13:06 You can respond by visiting: http://sourceforge.net/tracker/?func=detail&atid=376685&aid=546116&group_id=22866
Category: JBossDoc Group: None Status: Open Resolution: None Priority: 5 Submitted By: Daniel Byers (dcbyers1) Assigned to: Nobody/Anonymous (nobody) Summary: Corrections for main JBoss 2.4.4 PDF Initial Comment: Notes taken while reading through several sections of the main JBoss pdf book (page numbers are from the main text part of the PDF file and are not the Acrobat page numbers) p. 5 -- Second full sentence on page is incomplete. p. 6 -- First line: 'saves converves' is redundant (choose one or the other). p.16 -- First paragraph -- Correct 'Capter 2' to 'Chapter 2' p.17 -- Standardjaws.xml paragraph -- Correct sentence ending 'and son on' to 'and so on' p.28 -- Introduction, Last paragraph, 2nd sentence -- 'You will also the JBoss...' is awkward and unclear. p.64 -- Middle of page Timeout description -- 'between checks between runs' is redundant (choose one or the other). p.68 -- EJBProxy Types paragraph, 5th sentence -- change 'proxy class' to 'proxy classes'. p.78 -- Verifying EJB Deployments, 4th sentence -- 'and that the object' to 'and that the objects'. p.80 -- 2nd bullet -- 'StatelfulSessionContainer' to 'StatefulSessionContainer' p.80 -- Code -- 2nd from last line -- change 'onwns' to 'owns' p.81 -- last paragraph, 3rd sentence -- change 'access' to 'accessed' p.96 -- Contexts, 5th sentence -- change 'can latter be' to 'can later be'. p.124 -- summary paragraph, 2nd sentence -- changed 'learned ho' to 'learned how' p.157 -- CMP, 1st paragraph, last sentence -- change 'latter' to 'later' p.159 -- End of 1st paragraph -- change 'latter' to 'later' p.160 -- void activateEntity paragraph, 3rd sentence -- change 'calls' to 'call' p.163 -- code example, 3rd statement in setContainer -- change 'FileSotre#' to 'FileStore#' p.183 -- Java to SQL ... paragraph, 4th sentence -- change 'for you database' to 'for your database' p.315 -- 2nd sentence after code listing -- change 'methodis' to 'method' ---------------------------------------------------------------------- You can respond by visiting: http://sourceforge.net/tracker/?func=detail&atid=376685&aid=546116&group_id=22866 _______________________________________________ Jboss-development mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/jboss-development
