Hi Raymond,

I checked the additions related to string deduplication in the java(1) man 
page. Looks fine to me.

/Per

On 27 May 2014, at 16:36, raymond gallardo <raymond.galla...@oracle.com> wrote:

> Hello Reviewers,
> 
> As part of the OpenJDK review processes, and the next Java SE 8u20 release, 
> the OpenJDK 8 nroff files for Java tools are up for review, which is 
> available here as a zip file:
> 
> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rgallard/openjdk_nroff_may_2014.zip
> 
> Please provide your feedback by *Thursday, May 29, 2014*.
> 
> The following sections describe what kinds of review comments we're looking 
> for and what has changed for Java SE 8u20. Please contact us if you have any 
> questions.
> 
> * Scope of Review
>   
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> * Provide Feedback
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> * How to View a Man Page
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> * What's Changed
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> 
>   Scope of Review
> 
> Please provide a sanity check of content as opposed to reviewing the nroff 
> markup itself.
> 
> A line-by-line comparison between the html and nroff versions is not needed.
> 
> 
>   Provide Feedback
> 
> Please indicate your approval and provide feedback by e-mail by *Thursday, 
> May 29, 2014***.
> 
> All feedback will be triaged. Severe technical inaccuracies and other small 
> bugs will be fixed. Due to Java SE 8u20 release plan deadlines, bugs will be 
> filed for large scale changes and will most likely be handled in a future 
> update release.
> 
> 
>   How To View A Man Page
> 
> 1.
> 
>   Download the |openjdk_nroff_may_2014.zip| file to a directory of
>   your choice. (The exact zip file name will vary depending upon the
>   exact man page bundle and creation date.)
> 
> 2.
> 
>   Open a terminal window. Change to the directory that contains the
>   zip file.
> 
> 3.
> 
>   Extract the contents of the zip file as follows:
> 
>   $ unzip openjdk_nroff_may_2014.zip
> 
>   This creates a sub-directory named openjdk_nroff_may_2014 in the
>   current directory.
> 
> 4.
> 
>   Change directory to |openjdk_nroff_may_2014| as follows:
> 
>   $ cd openjdk_nroff_may_2014
> 
> 5.
> 
>   View a man page with a command of the following form:
> 
>   $ man -M man <page name>
> 
>   For example, to view the javap man page, run the following command:
> 
>   $ man -M man javap
> 
> 
>     Notes
> 
> *
> 
>   (Linux and Mac only.) The -t option to the man command will generate
>   typeset output in PostScript format and send it to stdout:
> 
>   $ man -M man -t javap > javap.ps
> 
>   PostScript can be displayed using Preview (on Mac) and by the Gnome
>   Document Viewer (Linux/Gnome). (On Solaris, the man -t option will
>   send the output to a printer, which might not be what you want.)
> 
> *
> 
>   If bullets render as a funny character, set the remote character set
>   to UTF-8. For example, if you are using PuTTY, an SSH and telnet
>   client, you can specify the remote character set by selecting from
>   the context menu *Change Settings... > Window > Translation > Remote
>   character set > UTF-8*.
> 
> 
>   What's Changed
> 
> * Technical content changes related to JDK 8 features have been made.
>   These changes have already been reviewed by the engineer responsible
>   for each feature.
> * HTML documentation for Java tools has also been generated, which has
>   the same content as the nroff files up for review, and which will be
>   available on download.java.net.
> 
> 
>   Summary of Changes
> 
> The following lists significant changes made to the Java tool nroff pages for 
> this release as well as the engineer who reviewed the content.
> 
> javac
> JDK-8042840 (opened by Omair Majid): Duplicated code in javac man page
> JDK-8038427 (Erik Costlow): JDK 8's javac does not list -source 8 ... also 
> made changes to the -target option
> 
> javafxpackager
> JDK-8042342 Renamed to javapackager (Danno Ferrin)
> JDK-8033610, Update info on packager for 8u20 (and other deployment 
> information)
> 
> javapackager
> New page (as a result of javafxpackager being renamed)
> 
> java
> JDK-8033606: Experimental options related to Restricted Transactional Memory, 
> (Vladimir Kozlov)
> JDK-8033604: String deduplication, (Per Lidén)
> Additional information for UseAES hardware supportability.
> JDK-8033103 (David Holmes), JDK-8042149 (Vladimir Kozlov): Various fixes. 
> emoved the option UseBoundThreads, Better categorized options, in particular, 
> HotSpot Server VM, Advanced JIT Compiler Options, and Advanced Runtime 
> Options.
> JDK-8039398 (opened by Staffan Friberg; verified by Filipp Zhinkin) Spelling 
> errors in GC print flags
> JDK-8032663 Retire some rarely-used GC combinations: Moved all CMSIncremental 
> options to the Deprecated section
> Changes to Java Man pages for AES flags.
> Additional information for AESIntrinsics
> Additional information for bug JDK-8034904
> 
> javap
> Added a link to jdeps (Mandy Chung)
> 
> jmc
> JDK-8037401: Minor changes
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> The Java SE 8 Documentation Team
> 
> 
> 

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