- In sentence "The graph that is compared to the persistent graph is always constructed using the class factory" it is not clear what is meant by class factory. Actually this is the first factory described in the list of concepts. Maybe it is easier to move the sentence after the bulleted list and then refer the first factory.
- The description uses the name CompanyFactoryImpl for a concrete factory implementation: "The strategy for implementation is for a concrete class CompanyFactoryImpl that contains ...". The xml sample code use the same class name CompanyFactoryImpl as the name of the factory that delegates to the concrete factory. I find this confusing.
- The description uses the class name CompanyFactoryAbstractImpl as name of the abstract factory, the sample code adds the word "Interface":
CompanyFactoryInterfaceAbstractImpl. I think the description is correct.
- The constructor comment of the abstract factory sample code uses the wrong class name.
- The end of the document mentions that we need a factory that uses the PM.newInstance method with the pc class as the argument. I propose to add this option as the 4th concept under "The persistent graph is constructed using one of these concepts:"
the factory calls pm.newInstance on a concrete persistence capable class
- Minor: your text uses class names such as CompletenessTest, CompanyFactory,etc. which are resolved as links to other wiki pages. If you do not like these to show up as link just add two backquotes before the upper case letter in the middle: Completeness``Test.
Regards Michael
Javadogs,
Thanks,
Craig
Craig Russell
P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!
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