Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"

[Craig L Russell]

Hi Chris,

Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.

Thanks,

Craig

On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:

I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1


modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:




modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:

- Chris

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their persistence manager and have not been The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows: A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their persistence manager and have not been

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