Brian:
Changed accordingly, please review

Chris

Brian Cameron ??:
> Chris:
>
> DESCRIPTION
>      libawn is a dock-like navigation bar for the  linux  desktop
>      that positions itself at the bottom of the screen. It can be
>      used to keep track of open windows and behaves like a normal
>      window list.
>
> The description section explains what the avant-window-navigator
> binary does and doesn't seem to provide any information about the
> library, or explain why a user might want to use it.
>
> Would be better if the manpage explained the purpose of the
> library.  Also, would be helpful if the docs pointed towards some
> API documentation (either on-disk or a URL) so that people could
> learn more if they want.
>
> Also make sure you modify all the awn-related manpages so that
> their SEE ALSO sections point to the other awn-related manpages.
> For example awn-manager doesn't seem to point to awn-applet-activation
> or awn-schema-to-gconf.  All the awn manpages need their SEE ALSO
> sections updated, and they should point to the libawn page also.
>
> Brian
>   

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