Brian Cameron wrote:
> Lin:
>
>> New man pages.
>
> Comments:
>
> These man page do not describe any configuration options or files
> used to manage how gamin operates.  Is this because there is no way
> to configure it?
I didn't provide the man page for configuration files because those 
interfaces hadn't been ARCed. So I referred to the home page of Gamin in 
the man page as compensation. I think people can find sufficient 
information there.
>
> gam_server is installed to /usr/lib, not /usr/bin.  Therefore, it should
> be a section 3 manpage, not a section 1 manpage.
I don't think so, according to intro(3), this section only documents 
functions and libraries. Though gam_server is in /usr/lib, it's a 
command. Probably section 1M is the better here. e.g. pcmciad(1M), 
lpsched(1M).
>
> >     gam_server - The server of Gamin to gather the  file  events
> >     from Kernel and send to clients
>
> The grammar is not so good.  Perhaps this should be reworded to say
> "The Gamin server gathers file events from the kernel and sends these
> events to clients".
That's fine.
>
> >     gam_servergamin uses a client server model,  this  is  in  a
>
> gam_servergamin looks like an error.
Yes.
>
> >     large  measure  justified  by  the  inappropriate File Event
> >     Notification kernel API way to signal modification events to
>
> It sounds like you say that the reason for using gam_server is because
> it is inappropriate.  The wording is confusing.
>
> Using "API method" is better than "API way".
Ops, maybe a copy&paste error.
>
> >     an application but also to share kernel signal when multiple
> >     application monitors the same resource.  It  also  allow  to
>
> You could better explain what you mean by "kernel signal" and how
> it is shared with multiple applications.  In general, after reading
> this manpage it is not clear to me what this program does.
>
> >     fine  tune and filters event flow in the daemon, potentially
>
> You don't explain what can be fine tuned.
>
> >     minimizing resource consumption in applications.
>
> The SEE ALSO section of gam_server should include libgamin-1, and vice
> versa.
I wil think about above comments.
>
> Are there any online API docs you could point to in the libgamin-1.3
> manpage?
Yes, for the exported symbols of libgamin there are links in the home 
page point to FAM project/document of SGI.

Thanks,
lin

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