Hi Brian, On Thu, 2008-07-31 at 16:31 -0500, Brian Cameron wrote:
> Jedy: > > > SYNOPSIS > > evolution-webcal [--help ] [--display=DISPLAY] [uri] > > The [uri] should be documented in an OPERANDS section. I didn't > fix this, can you correct? Yes, I will. > > You also failed to list the --version option, which I fixed. Also > "DISPLAY" should be just "display". I also fixed this. > > > DESCRIPTION > > evolution-webcal is the default handler for all Webcal URI. > > When you click a URI which begins with webcal://, > > evolution-webcal will be called. And if the URI is correct > > it will create the calendar in Evolution. > > The above had some grammar issues, which I corrected. Please review > my changes. > > When you say "create the calendar in Evolution" do you mean to say > "will create a calendar event in Evolution"? Perhaps this could be > made a bit more clear? No, I do not mean a calendar event. "create the calendar folder in Evolution" may be better. > [...] > > > SEE ALSO > > evolution(1), attributes(5), > > I removed the comma after attributes(5). Are there any other > evolution related manpages that should be referenced? I will check, but I think there 2 should be enough. Regards, Jedy > > Brian > -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://mail.opensolaris.org/pipermail/jds-review/attachments/20080802/11fce59e/attachment.html>
