Warning: Opinions Follow! :) I wouldn't bring this up if the message were anywhere else but I find myself staring at the Jenkins startup screen more than I would like. It is also probably the first thing any new Jenkins user sees.
Currently, the message <#L54]> reads: Please wait while Jenkins is getting ready to work It's hard to explain why, but from my perspective as a native (American) English speaker, that strikes me as incorrect at worst, or slightly awkward at best. The word, "while," makes the present-continuous form, "is getting," seem strange. This works better (present-simple form): Please wait while Jenkins gets ready to work The following may be even better (albeit only slightly) than the above, since it's less redundant. (Note: I care less about this change.) Please wait while Jenkins gets ready I'm interested to know what others think. Thanks, Jamie -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Jenkins Users" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/jenkinsci-users/CA%2BonWPcX5JkD%2BOoJHTaeko81Ode0uL5oN_EGhphxCODi_SoMTg%40mail.gmail.com.
