AndrewJSchofield commented on code in PR #16083: URL: https://github.com/apache/kafka/pull/16083#discussion_r1620630034
########## clients/src/main/java/org/apache/kafka/clients/consumer/ConsumerRebalanceListener.java: ########## @@ -28,37 +28,37 @@ * This is applicable when the consumer is having Kafka auto-manage group membership. If the consumer directly assigns partitions, * those partitions will never be reassigned and this callback is not applicable. * <p> - * When Kafka is managing the group membership, a partition re-assignment will be triggered any time the members of the group change or the subscription + * When Kafka is managing the group membership, a partition re-assignment will be triggered whenever the members of the group change or the subscription * of the members changes. This can occur when processes die, new process instances are added or old instances come back to life after failure. - * Partition re-assignments can also be triggered by changes affecting the subscribed topics (e.g. when the number of partitions is + * Partition re-assignments can also be triggered by changing affecting the subscribed topics (e.g. when the number of partitions is Review Comment: "changing affecting" is not grammatical. I suggest reverting to "changes affecting the subscribed topics". ########## clients/src/main/java/org/apache/kafka/clients/consumer/ConsumerRebalanceListener.java: ########## @@ -144,8 +144,9 @@ public interface ConsumerRebalanceListener { void onPartitionsRevoked(Collection<TopicPartition> partitions); /** - * A callback method the user can implement to provide handling of customized offsets on completion of a successful - * partition re-assignment. This method will be called after the partition re-assignment completes and before the + * A callback method the user is providing handling of cleanup up resource which are being assigned to other customers and Review Comment: This one isn't right. It's not usually used for cleanup and "customers" is not right. I suggest "A callback method the user can implement to be notified when partitions are assigned to this consumer. This method will be called after the partition re-assignment completes and before....." -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: jira-unsubscr...@kafka.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org